STEVE JOBS AND APPLE
1- Watch your presentation and answer the following questions.
PRESENTATION
Do you use any resources: powerpoint, video, images, sound, real material...?
Prezi and images.
Are the resources focused on the topic?
Yes, the resources are focused on Steve Jobs, Apple and Technology.
Do the resources support your oral explanation?
Yes, because there were some images and text.
Is the timing 5- 10 minutes?
Yes, about 5 minutes.
BODY LANGUAGE & EYE CONTACT
Are you looking at your audience most of the time?
Yes, all the time. I didn't look the prezi or the paper.
Are you reading occasionally from your notes ?
No, I didn't read from my notes.
Are you doing any gestures/movement to hold the attention of your audience?
Yes, I signalized some things in the prezi.
STRUCTURE
Do you organize your ideas in order of importance?
Yes, I organize my presentation in parts and I think that all the parts were important.
Do you use discourse markers to make your ideas more clear? (First, then, secondly, on the one hand, on the other, finally…)
Yes, I used this discourse markers. (First, then, finally...)
CONTENT
Do you introduce new information to your audience?
Yes, I did, or I think that. The information about Apple's logos or the first computer of Apple I thinkt hat was a new information.
Is your information detailed, clear and...?
Yes, was very clear.
Do you give/show examples?
Yes, I gave examples with images.
LANGUAGE
Is your grammar correct, complex? (verbs, word order, tenses learnt in class)
Yes, the grammar was correct and quiet complex.
Is your vocabulary rich, varied (synonyms, idioms, expressions, phrasal verbs, topic-related)
Not a lot. I tried to use rich vocabulary but I didn't use phrasal verbs.
Do you use sentence linkers? (and, but, moreover, also, furthermore, although, however…)
Yes, I used that. (Although, and, but, so...)
Do you use fillers? (well, you know, for example, one second, repeating a word…
Yes, sometimes I used fillers. (For example...)
PRONUNCIATION & INTONATION
Do you know how to pronounce all your words? Did you check the pronunciation?
Yes, but I didn't know how to pronounce about two or three words. Now I know it.
Do you change your tone of voice or use a monotone tone all the time? Do you speak in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions?
I spoke in a fluid continuum but I didn't change my tone of voice, or I think that.
SELF-EVALUATION
FINAL MARK: =) =)
I think was 80-85%
2. Think.
What have you done well ? What do you need to improve?
I had done well all the parts except de pronunctation and the language.
I need to improve the language (I have to use more rich vocabulary, phrasal verbs...) and I have to pronounce well all the words that I have to say.
